Review Detail of HaracasAye in MANEUVER OF FILTH
Review detail
A very unimaginative and boring attempt at an evil mc. The mcs gold finger has nothing to do with filth. Its just a murderhobo system that rewards him with points for killing and can upgrade his cultivation and techniques with a click of a button. The use of evil points is also uninspired. While the mc is truly evil and I give author pros for that, its very one dimensional. He has no emotions, its like watching a robot cut chickens. How can readers connect with a character like this? The mc is overpowered and faces no problems making the conflicts boring cause you know how they are all going to end. The characters around the mc are similarly cardboard-like and offer nothing to the story than points for the mc to use. There is no excitement to be had reading this novel.
MANEUVER OF FILTH
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Thanks for review. I'll try to improve it as much as I can but I can't allow mc to have much emotions. 1st:-He loved his old mother at earth who'll probably die of old-age alone and hates [FILTH] a lot. So its not like he has no emotions its just that he has his priorities clear. 2nd:-Cardboard-like characters. well they'll remain so. I can't use a whole chapter for a side character who'll eventually be turned into dust. I don't like it and I won't do it. 3rd:-There are no challenges for Mc since he's been sneaky and covert from the start. He has four more opponents in the same world with same advantages and a lot of strong guys as well so he'll have opponents but it'll take time. 4th:-Novel has no system. The panel is a small fragment of [FILTH]'s power and it harvests origin and fellony. The panel will eventually disappear but novel will continue.
ARSENAL_2:Thanks for review. I'll try to improve it as much as I can but I can't allow mc to have much emotions. 1st:-He loved his old mother at earth who'll probably die of old-age alone and hates [FILTH] a lot. So its not like he has no emotions its just that he has his priorities clear. 2nd:-Cardboard-like characters. well they'll remain so. I can't use a whole chapter for a side character who'll eventually be turned into dust. I don't like it and I won't do it. 3rd:-There are no challenges for Mc since he's been sneaky and covert from the start. He has four more opponents in the same world with same advantages and a lot of strong guys as well so he'll have opponents but it'll take time. 4th:-Novel has no system. The panel is a small fragment of [FILTH]'s power and it harvests origin and fellony. The panel will eventually disappear but novel will continue.