Review Detail of CapaxInfiniti in Release That Succubus

I gave this a shot but this is rough. Firstly this story really feels like it's lacking a certain focus. Like parts of it just really feel... all over the place. Mainly regarding the MC. It's as if the author can't decide on exactly how to make the character. Secondly the intelligence of the MC is really... REALLY lacking... like really annoyingly so. Finally... actually I'm just leaving it here. I'm too tired to complain any further.