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I'm far too lazy to write a remotely good review at all so I'm just giving 5 stars to show the author that I love the book, I also, love watching Lenny get through insane predicaments I love the macabre acts and scenes within the book, I love how you(the author) progressed in writing skills, you went from a decent, novice writer to being able to pull me into your book like it was real stuff, a word of advice tho, please please lower the amount of words used to describe things in the current chapters, no offense as of rn most of the chapters words are descriptions for 1-2 attacks, I would keep rambling but I don't wanna seem like a jerk, but peace author, love the book yo

Devil Slave (Satan system)

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Good critique, too bad authors only respond to positive comments...hence no changes. Awesome book tho.