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After reading it the story is good but the problem lies with the lack of details like how did he get the 20,000 xp for summoning the brotherhood. Just try making it more detailed and making more paragraphs the story needs more spaces

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Wirsth

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it's obviously true, but it was like this because it was too timeless to write between the first 10 chapters. after a certain area it starts to go into more details. thanks for your comment.