I am a newbie author and its my first novel. I hope you guys call out my mistakes and we can perfect this story together. If you have any tropes or events you want me to add or any loopholes you find in the story do tell me. Bye Have fun reading <3 And pls read the end of story summary.
Raos_IOI
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LIKERulerOfAllThings:I dont get why you have to make Asher hate Amelia so much I get she's annoying but it's better to have her on our side and from what I see she's only annoying to him because he's so mean to her just show her kindness and she'll be easy to manipulate it feels off for all his moves to be somewhat calculated but leave Amelia hating him for no reason
Raos_IOI:Umm i don't know if it will count as a spoiler or not but its a single female lead.
Raos_IOI:Umm i don't know if it will count as a spoiler or not but its a single female lead.
I have entered this one for the fantasy carnival so if you want to support using power stones, use on this one.
Ashborn1609:also which one of your novel should I give power stone this one or the other they are the sameđ¤image
New author? Ur amazing bro continue this novel and don't drop it please, it's entertaining to read one so continue doing what you've been doing and good luck
Raos_IOI:I have entered this one for the fantasy carnival so if you want to support using power stones, use on this one.
Raos_IOI:Umm i don't know if it will count as a spoiler or not but its a single female lead.
Raos_IOI:Umm i don't know if it will count as a spoiler or not but its a single female lead.
Don_Nyx:Congrats author today is the day you achieved a million views you should be proud of your work and i am really happy for you as i am someone who has been reading this novel from the start but i never knew i will be Hooked into this novelimage
well this is going to be my first review on a novel as I really loved the concept and theme of this novel, though I genuinely think that the MC's personality can be improved a bit as he is way to dark and way to negative I mean would he actually improve his personality in the future or not???? as I really liked this a lot