Overall It's good novel.. .. Good Background(Wasteland VR)Good Story(Like Legendary Mechanic)Good Writing Quality(No MTL-like)Good Mystery(Cause Of World War)I Think you need to pay attention to your earlier charactercharacters...some are forgotten why? you said I have a list of character from alpha version 0.1–0.9 hehehehhGood Luck Author-san[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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