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Review Detail of The_man_The_myth in Danmachi: Reborn with EMIYA's Powers

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The_man_The_myth
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It was good and the writing is very good but honestly the story just isn’t the greatest the character is just so unbelievable unlikable. Honestly for the amount of chapters that it would take for his character to develop over a problem that seems honestly insignificant to me just doesn’t seem worth it story wise. Maybe if the author dialed it back abit with the self pity it would be ok. Worst of all the mc broke the biggest rule of transmigating, he told someone and in such a lame way as well. Authors a good writer but character is insufferable in my opinion

Danmachi: Reborn with EMIYA's Powers

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Weaboi
WeaboiLv13Weaboi

Well at least you explained why you have it a lower rating some people just say ‘it’s bad’ and rate 2 stars so stupid

Jake255
Jake255Lv4Jake255

He told someone he is not from that world ?

The_man_The_myth
The_man_The_mythLv4The_man_The_myth

Yup Zeus which looking back this novel wasn’t that bad but the first 15 chapters matter and when it 15 chapters of him whining about taking over another body idk just kinda dumb to me

Jake255:He told someone he is not from that world ?
RandomFanficFan
RandomFanficFanLv4RandomFanficFan

you really don't get it, do you? the Mc felt like he killed the original Bell Cranel, and it greatly helped his mental state by telling Zeus, a character that doesn't show up much in the story, and someone he trusts, also, wouldn't YOU tell someone at some point? Or would you keep that a secret for the rest of your life?

The_man_The_myth
The_man_The_mythLv4The_man_The_myth

First of all you comment makes no sense how do I not get it? My low rating is my opinion based on the fact that I don’t like the mc. The danger of telling a god what he is was dumb to begin with nor did I care for the 15 chapters of him wallowing in guilt over something he didn’t do my bad review we me simply not liking the character and the development

RandomFanficFan:you really don't get it, do you? the Mc felt like he killed the original Bell Cranel, and it greatly helped his mental state by telling Zeus, a character that doesn't show up much in the story, and someone he trusts, also, wouldn't YOU tell someone at some point? Or would you keep that a secret for the rest of your life?