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I_Love_Hina
I_Love_HinaLv131yrI_Love_Hina

It's pretty boring so far, Feels like a nothing burger, I get having a slow buildup and all but this just doesn't feel like a satisfying read to me. All you get is a desperate mc and all you feel is pity for him and that's all, The writing quality is good but the progression is not and that's all I have to say. Will update the review depending on whether the novels gets good or bad.(Some people might complain that it's too early to judge the novel in just the first 12 chapters but I think it's fair, people are even giving the fic 5 star just on the basis of his previous novels, so I think it's fair)

Danmachi: Reborn with EMIYA's Powers

Feniurme

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VuckLWolf
VuckLWolfLv4VuckLWolf

What other stories?

Feniurme
FeniurmeAuthorFeniurme

Hello, and thanks for the review! I agree that my story is not yet enjoyable since I'm still building some stuff up, and I like to take my time. But with chapter 10, I'm now finished with all that stuff. I hope you will be able to enjoy the stuff I write from that point on. Have a good day!

Bosu_san
Bosu_sanLv3Bosu_san

Understandable many people still hype about new things (including me), like you said this story still doesn't progress that much, many things still have to develop and it still a little boring, but I can feel like this story have potential and it slowly develop if author can make it good like we hope we may have decent stories to read.

funmaxwell
funmaxwellLv13funmaxwell

I think a number of those 5 star ⭐ reviews might be fake.