Review Detail of daylightmoon123445 in Home is Here

The first few chapters were quite dark, and selling someone at such a young age is just...painful, I hope everything will turn out good in the end :( The writing is good, I would suggest cutting down on the long paragraphs(bc it's strains my eyes to read them) and the writing style is unique. overall, the story is well-written, so kudos to the author and keep writing