Review Detail of TuzinhoTatu in Multiversal: The Shop

I liked this story until the long hiatus, it was even one of my favorites! But, when it came back, it got really bad. I don't know if the author changed something or if I just got pickier, but the story was just annoying at that point.The grammar here in itself is not really much of a problem, but the author (at least since the hiatus, I never re-read it to confirm) just pads the chapters out so much that it's annoying to read, it isn't entertaining anymore, pretty sad.