Pretty bad OC and Force interactions, and imagine shipping Lorelei and Shirou Emiya being Lorelei his sister? Simply disgusting as it's obvious it'll be quite force and I won't even bother seeing it through.
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LIKE.. I havent watch fate series yet so.. i dont really know why you hate Lorelei x Shirou but keep note that this is a 'FANFIC' there are bound to be changes ... i dont really know why you hate lorelei being his sister.. (Even though the interaction feels force i think the author could have done a better job at writing it and didnt skip the development of the realationship between shirou and lorelei) But personally i think its still good.