Review Detail of Merlin58 in Multiversal: The Shop
Review detail
The author deleted all reviews so I won't write a long review.There is r*pe in the story...........................................................................................................................
Multiversal: The Shop
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MorningWood_Dao:which chapter are you talking about ? I've read all chaps, no one got Ràped
MorningWood_Dao:which chapter are you talking about ? I've read all chaps, no one got Ràped
MorningWood_Dao:which chapter are you talking about ? I've read all chaps, no one got Ràped
Bro.. Celestine seriously celestine.. Its not the mc fault that he didnt saved celestine on time because the mc system only work when a certain individual walks into his store he cant visit other people/characters world without the person going into his store yet (And your thinking why didnt the author just write it before Celestine and the other got rap*d.... i didnt know and that is for a fact but one thing i know for sure that the mc help celestine destroy the Se* empire) .. I mean bruhhh ... cant you just appriciate that you cant make a good story without something bad happening in it first .w.
Merlin58:chapter 50
Dude...I didn't like the rap* in general and the way he went to the h*ntai world.That's why I give a low review.
FandomExplorer_2nd:Bro.. Celestine seriously celestine.. Its not the mc fault that he didnt saved celestine on time because the mc system only work when a certain individual walks into his store he cant visit other people/characters world without the person going into his store yet (And your thinking why didnt the author just write it before Celestine and the other got rap*d.... i didnt know and that is for a fact but one thing i know for sure that the mc help celestine destroy the Se* empire) .. I mean bruhhh ... cant you just appriciate that you cant make a good story without something bad happening in it first .w.
Merlin58:Dude...I didn't like the rap* in general and the way he went to the h*ntai world.That's why I give a low review.
I think the problem was that there is a big possibility of the author to make it better or going to the cliche way but He did his own and made it worse since he could have saved it and I think an OC would fit in this type of settings since no wants to remember that h**tai and relive through that horrible scenes again. 💀💀💀💀
FandomExplorer_2nd:Bro.. Celestine seriously celestine.. Its not the mc fault that he didnt saved celestine on time because the mc system only work when a certain individual walks into his store he cant visit other people/characters world without the person going into his store yet (And your thinking why didnt the author just write it before Celestine and the other got rap*d.... i didnt know and that is for a fact but one thing i know for sure that the mc help celestine destroy the Se* empire) .. I mean bruhhh ... cant you just appriciate that you cant make a good story without something bad happening in it first .w.
