Review Detail of Netherlicht in TWD: A New Beginning From the End of the World

It's really a great story, but a lot of it reads like translated MTL and some writing is veeeeeery awkward. Dialogues are the same, it's not that the dialogues are bad per say they're just phrased very weirdly and riddled with errors, the author should really have an editor clean it up. I have only read about 1/4th of the story and I hope it improves later on. All in all, I will probably read this til the end and hope it improves because the foundation of the story is very strong and can only improve