Review Detail of BryndenRivers in TWD: A New Beginning From the End of the World
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Dialogue is so god awful I couldn't get passed the third chapter. The entire 2nd chapter is just word vomit and makes no sense. It's clear the author is either a non native English speaker, or just ran a chinese novel through google translate and posted it here.
TWD: A New Beginning From the End of the World
SrCuervo
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Nossa não tem como ficar melhor!! Bom quem sabe? Talvez possa?? melhorou muito nesses capítulos atuais , muito interessante, sem reclamações.
SrCuervo:I've asked this many times, but no one is really uninterested in editing large numbers of chapters. You have to know that in this novel there are already more than 300k words... The dialogues will improve a lot in the future, but my problem was not concentrating much on the translation. I think I have an improvement on the current HP novel I'm publishing, I haven't been told anything about grammar so far. I hope it's improved somewhat, but until I get an edit that's my damnation for much more experienced readers.
I genuinely can't speak about the contents of the novel cause I didn't get that far. However I CAN say that an improvement in the grammar and dialogue would help TREMENDOUSLY. You've obviously been told to get an editor or use some free grammar software to fix it for you, so best I can do is just wait and wish you luck.
SrCuervo:I don't speak English very well, that's the main problem. Thank you for reading.
I've asked this many times, but no one is really uninterested in editing large numbers of chapters. You have to know that in this novel there are already more than 300k words... The dialogues will improve a lot in the future, but my problem was not concentrating much on the translation. I think I have an improvement on the current HP novel I'm publishing, I haven't been told anything about grammar so far. I hope it's improved somewhat, but until I get an edit that's my damnation for much more experienced readers.
BryndenRivers:I genuinely can't speak about the contents of the novel cause I didn't get that far. However I CAN say that an improvement in the grammar and dialogue would help TREMENDOUSLY. You've obviously been told to get an editor or use some free grammar software to fix it for you, so best I can do is just wait and wish you luck.
Soares_Jers0n:Nossa não tem como ficar melhor!! Bom quem sabe? Talvez possa?? melhorou muito nesses capítulos atuais , muito interessante, sem reclamações.