I'm disappointed, but the author does an excellent job in terms of writing. I only read chapters one through eight. What I like about this story are the background and world-building. The author does a great job of giving us an image of the environment. I also like the storytelling and flow of the story. But it can be rigid and forceful. What I dislike most is the dialogue. It would have been better if the story had a Southern writing style. It's difficult for foreigners to understand, but it's what I wanted to see. Unfortunately, this story has an Asian resemblance, almost like an MTL. It would have been better to add strategic locations, like Wal-Mart, back when you could buy guns in the good old days. I would have liked to see more realism involved and fact-checking. Lastly, I didn't enjoy the repetitiveness of certain words and expressions. Expanding your vocabulary and finding other ways to express the MC would help. Overall, it's a decent 3.5 for me.
SrCuervo
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LIKEHentai_Senchou:You can still buy guns in walmart, just not ar-15's. Also can't get handguns anymore. Some walmarts don't have them, but basically every walmart in the south does.
they sell rifles and shotguns(no pistols or automatics) they are usually on active display during hunting season
Avrin13:nobody buys guns at a Walmart.