Review Detail of DaoistDoom in My Oni System
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Author here… I started this book with the attention to using my developing skills to write a novel that been bugging ever since I wrote my first one. I didn’ t want to start this novel and dropped it like my other ones so I decided to write this novel and only this novel for at least 3 months or until I reach 100 chapter. I want to make a gang leader or a family leader that actually thinks like one not some kid trying to write the wrongs of his city or something. So expect a villian mc and wide amount of side cast.
My Oni System
DaoistDoom
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I mean he is on a demon planet he should feel at home right I hope later on he doesn’y magically want to be human again like every non human novel but yeah he will fit right in a demon planet he doesn’t even have to be a gang leader as on a demon planet just take over sum land and name ur self demon lord aslong as u strong u can do whatever and I’m positive a former human isn’t as cruel as the demons on the planet so he might look like a child infront of some demons hmm idk
TheprimordialGod:I mean he is on a demon planet he should feel at home right I hope later on he doesn’y magically want to be human again like every non human novel but yeah he will fit right in a demon planet he doesn’t even have to be a gang leader as on a demon planet just take over sum land and name ur self demon lord aslong as u strong u can do whatever and I’m positive a former human isn’t as cruel as the demons on the planet so he might look like a child infront of some demons hmm idk
I can’t talk about the demon lord stuff right now but it’s a reason he calls it a gang in the beginning
TheprimordialGod:I mean he is on a demon planet he should feel at home right I hope later on he doesn’y magically want to be human again like every non human novel but yeah he will fit right in a demon planet he doesn’t even have to be a gang leader as on a demon planet just take over sum land and name ur self demon lord aslong as u strong u can do whatever and I’m positive a former human isn’t as cruel as the demons on the planet so he might look like a child infront of some demons hmm idk
Nice book, reading the synopsis, anyone can tell it'll be a great read but then.... you've got grammatical errors. If you already have errors in your synopsis, how then will your chapters be? I'm not trying to make you feel bad... I want your book to be outstanding, you should correct those mistakes. Use Grammarly for a better grammar. If you need more help, I think I can help you.
Ruby_banks02:Nice book, reading the synopsis, anyone can tell it'll be a great read but then.... you've got grammatical errors. If you already have errors in your synopsis, how then will your chapters be? I'm not trying to make you feel bad... I want your book to be outstanding, you should correct those mistakes. Use Grammarly for a better grammar. If you need more help, I think I can help you.