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Review Detail of part_time_Otaku in Avatar: The Untold Story

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I am sorry but this has been pretty mid so far.. Almost a copy paste of the movie..The MC does not even have a dialogue..He just said the witty things someone else said in the movie.. At least change the situations and dialogue a bit.. Writing quality is sub par and description is lacking..It's a wonder it ranked so high in my opinion But if this is Author's first book? The he need to be more serious.. Experienced or not anything written with passion and enthusiasm can be seen and I have not seen any in this... Good luck Author..Hope you don't drop and prove me worng in upcoming chapters

Avatar: The Untold Story

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Theres only 3 chps so your review is kinda mid, but i get ya ig