Review Detail of Silent_But_Dudley in I Will Kill The Author

Read up to 130 chapters, and it wasn’t bad. It’s okay and has decent enough worldbuilding, grammar and writing. My complaints? Main character is inconsistent as hell with decision making. Half the time it seems like he’ blundering his way through stuff, the other half he’s competent. It feels like he’ supposed to be like 4 different people in the same body, and it feels off. Dropped at 130. For saying that the character isn’t a villain but an antihero, I think thats wrong. Child killing is a hard line for me, and any main character who directly kills kids like that instantly becomes unsympathetic no matter what. So, if I feel disgust towards the main character, it takes me out of the novel. I think it was a poor choice, and unfortunately I won’t be reading anymore. Some people can ignore it and that’s fine, but it’s pretty hard to make such an unlikable protagonist in a single chapter.