Review Detail of StaticMatter in I Will Kill The Author

So I read up to the last free chapter and I have to say the story is not bad but it not great either. Also be aware there are a lot of 4th wall brakes. The last thing I would like to add is if you are expecting a serious story were the MC strives to gain as much power as possible to overcome what will happen in the future then move on to another story. No one in this story feels like they are taking things seriously and a comedy tag really should be added to this story.