Review Detail of Ken_Kaneki_9394 in I Will Kill The Author

As I read that this was was from the same author as that of Villain's Rising, i had massive expectations for this, but it was a huge letdown. The whole novel feels like a fantasy i dream if I ever reincarnated with plotholes and characters just being there. I liked the plot but the moment I knew it was in a military school setting with the students acting as chess pieces with authority and whatnot, I knew it would be a disaster. I really hate it when in novels it's like the strongest will be at the top of the school committee and will have the highest authority and the lower one goes the less. I just don't know how the bigshots will let some kids (i know they're 18 but no one was acting like one) to act like the authority in school. Like the queen gives a starting speech with no one there, no principal or vice principals, not even the teachers. And she's just a student there like the rest of them (idk she was in idfk community) and that's not even the weirdest part. Later on 2 class get angry with each other and she basically says to solve it in a BATTLE ROYALE style with the top students in class acting as commanders and stuff, but the thing is, she could solve it but thought that they should know about the real world. Mind you in the battle royale, these kids f-king die and kill each other with no remorse. The mc later just walks in bloodshed like NO ONES GONNA GET TRAUMA FROM THIS?!??! AND THEY JUST ACT LIKE NOTHING HAPPENED WHEN ONE OF THE TEAMATE JUST BETRAYS AND TRIES TO KILL THE MC. THE PROTAG JUST KILLS HIM AND DONE. I don't even know what to say man, it just... *sigh* But that's not even the worst bit yet, it's the characters. They... don't even feel like living beings. First the characters are introduced one after another and they are like 8-9 DIFF CHARACTERS IN ONE CHAPTER. I HAD TO WRITE THAT SHI IN NOTEPAD TO EVEN REMEMBER ABOUT IT. OPENING THE DAMN NOTEPAD EVERY 2 CHAPS LIKE FO YOU REALLY THINK I HAVE PHOTOGRAPHIC MEMORY. Anyways the mc while has interactions with some characters, at the same time he doesn't? Like i still don't know what kind of guy the real mc is, or the black hair annoying girl or the default blue haired innocent chick. All i know is the real mc is this guy being a simp and sometimes tries to act kinda emo with how he suddenly become all cold. The characters just feel like default stock characters the author choose to fart that day. I can go more on rant for this but basically Plot- good at start but later kinda becoming sht + military school setting with students as authority so you know it's gonna turn bad really quickly Writing- major info dumps in the start which are just.... Yea very bad Characters- stock default characters with them being bland, hardly having any distinct personality and being annoying in general. World- basic stuff, earth invade, continent one so now world turn from future to medival And author, pls just take a break if you're writing this in a burnout, compared to Villain's rising this is very bad, I know you can do better than this so just take a break.