Review Detail of gnatrou in The Tellus Mage(OLD VERSION OLD VERSION OLD VERSION OLD VERSION)

Although there are a bunch of aspects that set this story apart, it's still another of those somewhat generic "reborn as a baby and growing up" type of stories, which isn't bad by any means (there is a reason why it's so used, after all). They generally allow more time for character development/growth and even world-building to shift over the years, which the author utilizes quite well. The writing quality is excellent, with vivid imagery and a wonderful flow, although some occasional unnatural paragraphs exist, which is understandable with such consistent and fast chapter releases. Word choices are fantastic (such as using hazel instead of brown). The author could use more creative or figurative language, but by no means is it essential. Your story's got a lot of potential. Good luck and happy writing!