Review Detail of Pragmatico in New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
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I enjoyed what was free. grammar is better than 99% of the stories on here. The story progress slow at times and the author likes to switch to other characters POV a little to much for my taste since they don’t seem relevant yet to the MCs story. No real world building in the game world yet other than the village where the MC is. No clue on what races live where or world events that are happening. Wish the author luck though
New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
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Yes but the author takes time to introduce side characters and still gives zero world building while doing so adding nothing to the story until the mc eventually meets these people
Mylittledragon:it clearly states in the synopsis that nothing is known about the game