Review Detail of Bad_Thiliono in New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live

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Bad_ThilionoLv151yrBad_Thiliono

Nobodies mentioning it so I’m going to. This story suffers in only one way and that’s the social interactions. They feel very childlike and basic. Also the mc has some annoying traits as far as social interactions go and it’s off putting. Otherwise it’s a decent read.

New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live

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Alan_GrimlordLv3Alan_Grimlord

I'm an author but no reviews of my novel, how would you recommend the characters interact with each other then.

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JJWindigoLv12JJWindigo

human, realistic. Somewhat relatable.

Alan_Grimlord:I'm an author but no reviews of my novel, how would you recommend the characters interact with each other then.

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Alan_GrimlordLv3Alan_Grimlord

thanks, man the story will be on a break because I have finals and I have to study for that

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InkedbymoonlightLv3Inkedbymoonlight

I can relate here

Alan_Grimlord:thanks, man the story will be on a break because I have finals and I have to study for that

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nekrom1Lv3nekrom1

interested in reading my story in wpc.

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