Review Detail of Sword_1mmortal in Badass Peter Parker
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He’s supposed to be this cunning veteran with experience and discipline but he acts nothing like this. He gets set off by high schoolers when just ignoring them would do the trick. He acts more of a man child sometimes, like going off on a high school girl, legit yelling and snapping at them when he hitched on a ride with one of his basketball team members for sneaker shopping. Like dude, you’re the one riding with them. They’re annoying sure, just bare with it, have some discipline for gods sake. What happened to the whole Indian army veteran thing, it’s like the author forgets the background he gave his mc most of the time. Then there’s the whole adding other oc insert characters with abilities like stopping time.
Badass Peter Parker
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UdayWrites:Lol it's almost like YOU forgot that Peter parker is merged with the SI, not completely erased. Why would the army veteran's Past or previous expertise matter during peace time. Regarding the fight between teenagers, this is addressed in the future chapters. Oh and OC's are here to stay, they have an integral purpose to the story. You mistake personality issues of the MC for bad writing and you know what that's like your opinion dude.
Lol it's almost like YOU forgot that Peter parker is merged with the SI, not completely erased. Why would the army veteran's Past or previous expertise matter during peace time. Regarding the fight between teenagers, this is addressed in the future chapters. Oh and OC's are here to stay, they have an integral purpose to the story. You mistake personality issues of the MC for bad writing and you know what that's like your opinion dude.
spiderman is extremely durable so he shouldn't have been bruised by them and how is the mc going to deal with the time pause during the basketball game.
UdayWrites:Lol it's almost like YOU forgot that Peter parker is merged with the SI, not completely erased. Why would the army veteran's Past or previous expertise matter during peace time. Regarding the fight between teenagers, this is addressed in the future chapters. Oh and OC's are here to stay, they have an integral purpose to the story. You mistake personality issues of the MC for bad writing and you know what that's like your opinion dude.
it's weird you are accepting some rando uneducated possibly teenager as a source of knowledge about how REAL army veterans are.
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