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The_Founder
The_FounderLv1511mthThe_Founder

the story has so much verbiage, races that are only described once, characters whose development you'll prolly never see again.... IT'S A MESS. It's like somebody built up 10 years' worth of ideas and never had, an second person streamline it.

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Alright. Had to call down to draft a good argument But. You're right I guess. I'm not really a good writer. This is just a hobby. Something I find fun, writing my thoughts that is. Characters like The administrators are those whom I consider my worst work because I didn't know how to portray them. Holloway has a set arc, which is not now. As for description and races. Dude I don't really know how to get anyone to do that for me. Like I said it's a hobby not a work. Heck, I don't even care for a contract. I just write this to escape reality. So im not bothered about getting a good artist or whatever to create art for me. How am I gonna pay for that? It's not on my budget. Just trying to make sure I get enough character development on Hilde. That alone is hard to note. As for Verbiage. Had to look that up and honestly I don't know which words are considered over much or utilized. I hope you get this. This is not a job for me. I don't care for anyone to read or not. I just enjoy writing and obviously I'm not good at it but it's relaxing and addicting. So yeah. Hope you stick around to see more of this mess. 😁

SaimtNoctis
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Thanks for the Review.