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I'm really liking the fanfic you are writing. Modern family is one of my favorite series along with The big bang Theory and friends. The way you started the relationship between Will and Alex I liked it. Alex is one of my favorite characters. I didn't really like the relationships Alex had in the series. Most if not all of them didn't give Alex's character development. Not like it was with Haley. I am continuing with this story I am loving it so much.
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The development of a character depends on the author and the plot of the story. Alex begins as a character who is a know-it-all and feels misunderstood by her family. Her character starts to develop in those episodes where she is the one who learns the lesson at the end of the episode. Within this story the accompanying character of Will is becoming her support that she is not the only smart one in her crazy family. Will is the person who is marking her mistakes, someone to listen to, to understand. Will's involvement with the other members of the family was perfect as was Will's confession to Alex. I liked that they didn't instantly become boyfriend and girlfriend and especially in front of Claire.
AddPlus:Thank you but do know I just started write and I don’t know all about that development/character arc development. But I won’t mind if some of you guys help me out
ItzKronozz:The development of a character depends on the author and the plot of the story. Alex begins as a character who is a know-it-all and feels misunderstood by her family. Her character starts to develop in those episodes where she is the one who learns the lesson at the end of the episode. Within this story the accompanying character of Will is becoming her support that she is not the only smart one in her crazy family. Will is the person who is marking her mistakes, someone to listen to, to understand. Will's involvement with the other members of the family was perfect as was Will's confession to Alex. I liked that they didn't instantly become boyfriend and girlfriend and especially in front of Claire.
Hmm interesting well I guess I can still learn a few things but I do feel I am doing better in later chapters.
ItzKronozz:The development of a character depends on the author and the plot of the story. Alex begins as a character who is a know-it-all and feels misunderstood by her family. Her character starts to develop in those episodes where she is the one who learns the lesson at the end of the episode. Within this story the accompanying character of Will is becoming her support that she is not the only smart one in her crazy family. Will is the person who is marking her mistakes, someone to listen to, to understand. Will's involvement with the other members of the family was perfect as was Will's confession to Alex. I liked that they didn't instantly become boyfriend and girlfriend and especially in front of Claire.