Review Detail of IMMORTAL_ZANE_23 in Rapturous Rhapsody

Like one of the comments said, it's a diamond in the rough. The relationship between Mc and the girls was written very well. Even in the starting chapters, The fact that he told the girls that in his world they were just fiction also didn't cause any harm to the story rather it became better and formed a bond between them. The actual plot was also very well done. The English was unlike most WN wasn't poor at all. Thanks, author, for this wonderful work. I hope you create another masterpiece