This is an extremely high quality writing, although there are some typos and some grammar errors, it is very easy to read and get hooked to if you like the idea of an overpowered "old" man. I look forward to how the story develops in the Future. keep it up.
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LIKEHello! Thank you for leaving a review. I find reassuring that it is easy to read. When I first started writing this novel, I tried really hard not to make it a really difficult text, and I am very happy that I was able to do such, at least to some extent. Also, please, can you point out the grammar errors and typos? I will try to correct avoid them in the future. Once again, thank you for leaving a review and I hope you like the rest of the novel, as it gets released.