Review Detail of Dysleksik in Weightless - A One Piece FanFic

Hey All. This is my first story. I focus a lot on writing quality so that it can be a smooth read, though there will still be some errors as I haven't gone through and edited everything in its entirety. That being said, I did a lot of research into the science behind some of the powers I used, and will most likely continue to in the future. I am quite proud of my work on this story, but found that I was writing myself into a corner of following the plot, so I have taken a step back for a moment so that I can return with fresh enthusiasm. Hope you all enjoy my story, Cheers Ya'll!