Initial Evaluation: Potentially above average. The thought process pertaining to the story development was apt and remarkably good however the MC was way too OP which lessen the excitement of the readers which in turn will create plot holes and MC disability to adapt to the story progression. it was quite refreshing as author-san was exploring areas which weren't covered in DD-verse1 that was entertaining and broadening the scope of world & power discovery. Lessen the advantages MC get in shop & try to slow down a bit as fast paced story usually end up bad. Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
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