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chapters 6 and 7 contain NTR, the second personality takes over the mc's body to play with Ino, while the mc is trapped in the mind palace just watching.
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mc is still ''cuckold'' even though you don't have any relationship, I already said that each personality is a different person, you've never heard the phrase ''I think therefore I am'' you say they are the same person it doesn't make sense to me, they have different world views, different thoughts, different feelings and you say you are the same person because you have the same body.
who are you to say they are different personalities are different people. Not here, not in this novel, okay. I said they are all same with different set memories, and I say they are same person, then they are the same person. Thanks for reading.
ErickHenrique_BR:mc is still ''cuckold'' even though you don't have any relationship, I already said that each personality is a different person, you've never heard the phrase ''I think therefore I am'' you say they are the same person it doesn't make sense to me, they have different world views, different thoughts, different feelings and you say you are the same person because you have the same body.
The problem is not the personality, but the feeling I have when I read that a personality that took over the protagonist's body stayed with Ino, it's like if I read that a clone slept with Hinata while the protagonist is on a mission, a clone is much closer to being "a person" than the personality you described, a clone has the same memories, feelings and thoughts as the original, as opposed to the personality you described as having different memories, different feelings and different thoughts . it's still uncomfortable to see a clone with a female lead, how could it not be uncomfortable to read what you've written? why would I read a story that makes me uncomfortable? Your story was good, I was enjoying reading it, until I got to the part where a totally different personality has your body to ''play'' with who I understood to be the love interest of your story. I'm kind of tired of writing answers, I'm Brazilian so I have to translate on Google, and sometimes what I write translates completely wrong, or the words disappear or are replaced by words that don't make sense, everything you read has been changed several times until you can read it.
metalrod:who are you to say they are different personalities are different people. Not here, not in this novel, okay. I said they are all same with different set memories, and I say they are same person, then they are the same person. Thanks for reading.
that isn't how this works buddy I can say a man is a woman and a woman is a man doesn't mean they are. The same applies here.
metalrod:who are you to say they are different personalities are different people. Not here, not in this novel, okay. I said they are all same with different set memories, and I say they are same person, then they are the same person. Thanks for reading.
You going to post or This dropped its been six days and i speak from experience if you wait longer the chance you wont post against increses a lot Once it hits a month Chances are the story is dead Sadly
metalrod:who are you to say they are different personalities are different people. Not here, not in this novel, okay. I said they are all same with different set memories, and I say they are same person, then they are the same person. Thanks for reading.