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Read up to 94 Trying to like the story but… Mc reasons and argues with his system about morality and stuff like that as if we was from our world. Makes no sense. The plot is driving him, he keeps getting into situations where he can’t transform because an uninvited/ unwanted party member was push into him his party Story is barely moving after 94 chapters Lots of slice of life stuff and not fast paced at all Lots of chapters of doing nothing to push the plot forward People keep getting away with attacking him and they don’t die His system is very pushy about what it wants him to do Now he HAS to eat dragons because of his vampire and lycan trait huh His progress is slow On a positive note writing is ok updates seem solid
The dragon's harem
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First, you're right. It's indeed slow at the start as the main point is establishing three things. Arad is a newborn that know nothing of the world, something is off about the system, and that Arad is trying to learn how to be a human, not a dragon. To clear a few of those questions... Why he argues with morality? If Mom is a shard of his mother, guess where his way of thinking came from, he did carry more than it seem. The plot is driving him. Yes, the book has a plot that it follows. Uninvited/unwanted party members? He just started working as an adventurer and knows nothing of the world. When you get a job, you don't get to chose your coworkers unless you've climbed the ranks. For the slice of life, this is a harem novel, so yeah, he has to spend some time with them or at least his party members. Why eat dragons? When a human becomes a vampire, he needs to drink human blood. It's the same for dragons, a dragon need to drink dragon blood. And lycanthrops eats their kind as well. Thanks for the review. I hope this cleared something. I know that my early writing is a bit sloppy and I might've failed to make a few things clear, sorry for the confusion.