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Review Detail of aiden_rivera in Genshin Impact: Soul System

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very good story the only problems I have it's that the dialog is a little lacking and it's a little to fast paste which makes it seem worse if the dialog and interactions had a little more depth to it as well as a little more charecter development/depth like how did he meet them and what's the story that allowed him to get close to them all ect act plenty of stories apart this way and have flash backs or indepth dialog about this but the lack of/fast pace of the dialog and story as a whole makes the whole interactions with the cast seemed rushed or forced tldr story's very good just the pacing and dialog with the lack of some detail is the problem also ~oni chan --->

Genshin Impact: Soul System

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Ok that’s good to know! I will try to slow it down a little bit but it’s my first fan fiction! Just let me know some feedback and I’ll consider it done… I need fillers now don’t I? Sigh.