Writing Quality- Good not many mistakes. Story- Started off slow but around chapter 30 it picks up. Characters- Kind of lacking to me doesn’t really focus to much on any character in particular. If you’re hoping for an mc who loves his new family im sorry to say that it hasn’t happend yet as of chapter 50. Mc- Smart, decisive, not lazy as the description says. So far the only time he’s been lazy is when he’s a baby which makes sense but other than that can’t really think of much. Good story for when you got nothing else to read, would be different if it had more chapters I can see myself binge reading it over night.
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LIKENo problem. Keep up the good work and don’t mind peoples bad comments. I know I myself tend to complain a lot when I’m reading stuff, I’m just a picky person but I also know that authors can’t please everyone. Just focus on what you think works im really enjoying the novel so far.
Devesh_Kulkarni:Thank you for the review