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It's awesome the synopsis gives you a proper picture and this is the first time I have seen MC having a proper character despite the circumstances which is amazing and author does an amazing job at that too but the only problem I see here is author is nerfing him too much I mean you made duo elemental despite his experience in many worlds and Arthur would do quadra elemental because he knew how to harness 'Ki' into different properties and would do the same with 'Mana' but you made it so that the MC can't I am saying it you are nerfing him because to harness 'Aether' you have to have all 4 elements harnessing, well that's that about the writing I will say grammar is proper but spelling mistakes and POV transition would improve, The other thing I want to say is you are making the development too slow like he feels like a side character in the story because it is others's POV most of the time and not his which is Okay sometimes but after that you start losing intrest in the MC himself like I feel like he is a side character there to help and support Arthur instead of being part of the story that's the only problem I would say I have and the other being slow updates, and Please don't drop this I am so invested in the story please don't drop it.

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