Review Detail of Dantas in TBATE - A More Experienced Hero
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Man, I wanted so much to read this fic but it gives me agony to have millions or billions? ahh whatever the fact of having thousands of living beings in the soul of the protagonist gives a lot of agony and there is also a fact that one of these souls can take control of the body of the protagonist, eventually whether this will happen or not. I'll never know because I won't read it.
TBATE - A More Experienced Hero
SleepyWalkerYN
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Wait.. So you won't read because of a single element made mostly for aesthetic and a liiittle for the narrative element? Okay, it's your choice to think like that, but there are a lot of other fantasy-like stories with this type of logic. Either way, If you change your mind or not, I dont see a problem, have a good new year, btw.
It wasn't because of the narrative element you put in your story, it was because I have the agony of having many other beings in the protagonist's soul
SleepyWalkerYN:Wait.. So you won't read because of a single element made mostly for aesthetic and a liiittle for the narrative element? Okay, it's your choice to think like that, but there are a lot of other fantasy-like stories with this type of logic. Either way, If you change your mind or not, I dont see a problem, have a good new year, btw.