Review Detail of daylightmoon123445 in A Knight's Honour

Hi author, you did a really great job writing this story, kudos to that! I see a lot of potential here. The characters are great and the synopsis is so eye-catching, I'm sure this story will pick up in no time!! Your writing has a few grammar errors here and there, nothing that can't be fixed with grammarly and some proof reading. And yes, I'm not a big fan of slow-paced webnovels, but hell, this is so good, I think I'm going to stick to see what happens.