Review Detail of ARMENDMAR in My Kingdom Building System

Hi author, I would like to tell you that so far (cap14) you are doing a good job. I am not an expert, but I would like to give my opinion. You seem to want to write a fairly inteligent character, however, he lacks insight, he has not yet asked for much information about the world where he has arrived, such as the name of the place where he lives and a map, it would also be interesting if he asked the system for information about what he can do (since when he talks to it he usually responds). You also wrote that he was good at most of the things he did before, it would be better to specify at what level though (basic, intermediate, advanced). As a suggestion to add to the statics, "Perception" would be interesting. The quality of the writing is an 8.5/10, there are some errors now and then, but it is quite easy to follow the thread. As a story I like the idea and I hope you will be able to improve it ,make it co-revealing to the reader and obviously climb the rankings. I hope you won't abandon the novel because, in my opinion, it has potential. Good luck.