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Review Detail of YoureBeautiful in Harem Overlord: I ALWAYS Finish Quick!

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YoureBeautiful
YoureBeautifulLv131yrYoureBeautiful

Are you sure this is not your life story? Joke aside, I just want to fill the reviews. The title is quite catchy

Harem Overlord: I ALWAYS Finish Quick!

2Big2FitIn

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YoureBeautiful
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Perhaps something like fewer info dumps. Smut novels shouldn't be that serious in the plot in the early stages. A lot of new authors in Webnovel make their heads explode with their own works and eventually end up either on hiatus or discontinued. Too many info dumps, and the plot is complicated. Because of that, I rarely give attention to the story and move directly to the main scene. Sometimes I could tell if the author was still virgiin by that. Quite ironic I think😂

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2Big2FitIn
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No, Ryan is 2Fast2FitIn I'm 2Big2FitIn, there's a difference :D. Can you give me your feedback on my edited first chapters? Perhaps it changed your mind on the info dumps/not starting as fast.

DruggedCookie
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I just came to ask if there is yuri in the harem, if so, I won't read it,

2Big2FitIn:No, Ryan is 2Fast2FitIn I'm 2Big2FitIn, there's a difference :D. Can you give me your feedback on my edited first chapters? Perhaps it changed your mind on the info dumps/not starting as fast.