Review Detail of Sakura_Charmash in Keepers of Every Universe

First of all, let's start with good stuff. I actually liked the profoundness of your idea, that you went for the idea of an almighty creator creating a successor, teaching them how to create their own universe and also hinting at the uncertainty that lies beyond for the almighty herself as she has no idea where or how her ceasing to exist will happen. Then the man learning his way to become the keeper is well constructed. Your prose style of writing is pleasant and offers an easy, smooth read that I could read all the available chapters at once. Now the cons: For the entirety of seven chapters, all that happened was what I said above. I get that creating a universe is massive business, but there is nothing to the plot apart of that. Nothing that keeps you curious - nothing that makes you anticipate, no thrill. What happens after the man successfully creates the world? He rules over them as almighty and that's it? The plot has no conflict to hold a reader. The three characters I've come across so far works only as news anchors, they give the reader information. Not much of a feel to them, or distinctiveness that differs them from one another. Nothing that makes you hate one or root another. So, character building remains untouched here. Thirdly, I give your world building full star score on the creator business but then, during the last of available chapters the creator with help of that man pulled in from another dimension has gone back to create what we know and can very well picture ourselves. If you are given an empty slate of a world and power to fill it with your creations, why would you go and create a copy of a world that live in your subconscious? Wouldn't it be better if you go and create something no one has ever thought of? Shouldn't the creator be creative like that? That's what I thought at the end. Once again, there is so much potential in the almost lyrical prose that you write. I wish you all the best and all the luck to improve your craft. Cheers!