Review Detail of Lord_Serenity in Super Tech Prodigy

Shameless review from the author here. I made this review so that people can ask questions here. I also inform you that I am trying my best to write this novel as cleanly as possible but as my first language is not English, There are chances of mistakes happening here and there. But I am trying to change that. Constructive Criticism is welcome but know that this is my first book and mistakes will most probably be made