Review Detail of AI380 in NOBLE BEAST
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Although I don't quite understand the concept of this story, probably due to cultural differences, this story is well-written with neat paragraphs and the character development is good. If I have to squeeze out something that need to be improved, it will be some paragraphs with short dialogue mixed with narration, it would be best if dialogues can be separated from narration to prevent some readers from getting confused. But it's not a big deal. Overall, it is a good story.
NOBLE BEAST
vimbaimurindagomo
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Thank you very much for the review, much appreciated. I hear your concern hence the use of inverted commas" to denote dialogue apart from narration. As for the concept I would be happy to explain it to you if you like. Please take a look at my other book, THUNDERDOM Trilogies, https://www.webnovel.com/book/thunderdom-trilogies_24939745906620705.
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