Review Detail of EnthusiasticWalks in Gifted Academy: The Perfect Student
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Dear author, I'm loving what you're trying to do and want to succeed, so I'm letting you know what I think from an outside perspective. I can see how much you're influenced by COTE. However, it seems like you're seeking the rewards of the mystery instead of writing a story. COTE has a vibe where seemingly normal interactions are twisted behind the scenes. For example, a woman has Ayanokouji cook for her in one book, similar to your cauliflower soup scene. However, Ayanokouji agrees because he's forced to. People are trying to get him expelled, and she has him cook for her to get him expelled, and he exposed her and didn't get expelled at the end. It's all interconnected. Your scene, by contrast, is just feeding the character's desperation to get him to love her without reason. Later, the scene is meaningless as the Ayato deduces a random ruse in an unearned development. Not the same. Also, duly note that COTE's entertainment factor that balances the lack of action is the games. I'm a bit frustrated because I can see your talent and potential, but didn't get what you can bring. I hope you continue writing this style of novel. I'll look forward to your next work as you learn and improve. Thanks for writing! đ
Gifted Academy: The Perfect Student
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honestly, other than the fact that he came from a secret institute aimed at producing geniuses, I never felt the same vibe from COTE at all. unlike COTE, this is just too predictable and nonsensical. like coming from someone who excels at chess but struggles academically, does she need a pattern? And does this apply to every single subject? Ihighly doubt such a person even exists. and the ending of volume 1 was just too lame. anyone could see that the kidnapping scene was a setup due to their poor and DELIBERATE acting, and this wasn't the first time they had pulled off such a stunt. it's absurd and astonishing that a cohort of alleged geniuses attending a very prestigious school fail to see anything suspicious in those actions. and one more thing, an elite individual deliberately vandalizing someone's locker due to personal animosity is incredibly immature. true geniuses would never engage in such lowly behavior. what is she a kid? lmao. especially she's one of the main heroines. this is one of the reasons why I didn't feel the Classroom of the Elite vibe in here. the characters here act too childishly and immaturely. characters like Sakayanagi, Ichinose, Horikita or even Ibuki would never behave in such a manner.
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