Review Detail of Jayden_Allen in The Abyss Demon of The Heavens

It's alright, as it has 12 chapters right now. Grammer is frustrating and the repeating sentences are annoying, character description is not bad but mc is really the only one who was properly described technically. It has potential since its only got 12 chapters, the world building is weak but I can attribute that to the fact mc will be going to multiple worlds so it doesn't feel as necessary since he could be in a world for 5 chapters or 40+. I will definitely keep my eye on this in the future