Review Detail of SnowApathie in Darkness and Desire

A really good story with great grammar, intelligent characters, a good concept which is usually used in Chinese fanfic but this one doesn't't seem like it so that's a bonus. My only problem is that for example the first chapter equality, ayanokoji speech was't the same (for the first part I only watched the anime so idk if it so in the light novel) because the equality original speech was much better. But anyway I really like this story, please continue like that author