Ayy great story man, started hella intense with great action scenes, but bro got hella horny when he became of age lol, ending was absolute shit tho lmao, just wish you woulda made the story a bit longer. Overall I really enjoyed it, better than 99% of webnovels on this site in terms of quality which is saying something because you had like 0 professionalism.
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