Review Detail of RexHarris in (COMPLETE) A Murder Wizards Adventures
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This story has some flaws, but despite that it’s still an really enjoyable read. First the problem: MC can be kind of strange at times. It’s a SI and has some of the typical problems they can have. The other characters are done pretty well. It helps that they are mostly ANBU and quite anyways. My biggest gripe is probably using the academy 3 as super powerful just because it personally breaks immersion. But cannon is kind of iffy with them. There are some more minor things that aren’t a big deal at least to me. Pros: The biggest Pro for me and the reason it gets bonus points is the OC and the timeline. There is hardly any fanfics with MC in the anbu and it’ really enjoyable to read about it. A lot of the content is original which is great as it is new and not the exact same cannon that’s been slightly altered in tons of fics. Updates have also been great and author interacts with readers Overal a good naruto fanfic.
(COMPLETE) A Murder Wizards Adventures
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Yeah it does, honestly it’s just something that bothers me because I have seen a few other stories that over used it way to much in a way that broke immersion for me. Other people might not care. I do really enjoy the story and appreciate you writing!!!
Bored_MC:Man, you know how to make me smile >.<, I also wrote a bit about kawarimi earlier to address one of your comments about it being op, I hope that will help there. Thank you for the kind words!!!
RexHarris:Yeah it does, honestly it’s just something that bothers me because I have seen a few other stories that over used it way to much in a way that broke immersion for me. Other people might not care. I do really enjoy the story and appreciate you writing!!!
can you answer one question? What are your plans on love interest/romance and how many girls are we talking about here... Hopefully its 1 and romance doesn't starts untill canon arcs.
Bored_MC:Sure! I'll do that now!
Leon_Luis_:can you answer one question? What are your plans on love interest/romance and how many girls are we talking about here... Hopefully its 1 and romance doesn't starts untill canon arcs.
Bored_MC:Not sure if i will have actual romance, but if I do it will only be one person
Bored_MC:Not sure if i will have actual romance, but if I do it will only be one person
I like the recommendation, but the age differences made it impossible, also, he will get a summoning contract but he literally never uses summons, he only got one for the sake of Sage mode.... err spoiler?
Ruckducker:Can I please recommend best girl anko? Also will he have a summoning contract?image
Yeah I wrote this before reading thought it started at third war about. I just finished up to 112 great job man it’s a great fanfic.
Bored_MC:I like the recommendation, but the age differences made it impossible, also, he will get a summoning contract but he literally never uses summons, he only got one for the sake of Sage mode.... err spoiler?
Ruckducker:Yeah I wrote this before reading thought it started at third war about. I just finished up to 112 great job man it’s a great fanfic.