Review Detail of McWms99 in Chit Chat: The Rebirth Of Love

So I'll start with the negative since there aren't that many. Main one I see consistently is the paragraph spacing can be a bit long. Sometimes this makes the reading seem to drag on for a bit. But luckily the chapters are short so it doesn't weigh down the reader too much. There are a few spelling errors and a few sentences that are a little off but nothing to aggreges. The positives are many however. The main character is interesting and a joy to read. Many plots and twist that keep this romance novel kinda in a rollercoaster form of entertainment. I found myself getting engrossed in the narrative and plot and really enjoying what I did read. Keep up the work, clean up your story and finish your masterpiece!