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BearGod13
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Well, it was a fun concept but I think you just went too far into the endgame of the story too quickly. basically from the beginning, you showed there's a bigger story instead of small hints. Should have just stayed in the moment enjoying teasing everyone. Let him join a familia because that's a key point of this world.

In Danmachi world with Obito's power

KissShot6

Liked it!

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