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Review Detail of Pilotfranco in In Danmachi world with Obito's power

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Pilotfranco
PilotfrancoLv121yrPilotfranco

I enjoy the Tobi character interactions. I dislike the newly introduced plot about the mc being manipulated. I dislike the gun as a weapon, fighting with a chain or Kumas is more obito’s speed. I dislike how the mc only has one eye and doesn’t use wood even though akatski obito could. The mc seemed super weak but the otter chapter clarified that it was a soul problem so that’s no longer an issue. The writing needs work, the author needs a wider insult vocab and more descriptive vocab too. I’m really not a fan of bell so the mc being around bell is meh, tobi as a character is amazing and so far bell hasn’t brought that down so we’ll see but I really hate bell as a character. idk if I’ll come back to read we’ll see

In Danmachi world with Obito's power

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Pilotfranco
PilotfrancoLv12Pilotfranco

Kunai not kumas

Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

His way of being is annoying, he is like Yuuki Rito but adventurous and with a little more will, even so his weak attitude is very irritating